Collecting Audience Feedback



Audience Feedback Questions

Audience Feedback Questionnaire

1.     What is your age? Please circle appropriately.

16-20  21-24   25-28   29 or over

2.   What is your gender?

Male    Female

3.   Would you watch this documentary if it was on television?

Yes   No

4.   Do you think the music with-in the documentary links in with the theme?

Yes   No

5.    Does the opening to the documentary make you watch to watch more?

Yes   No  

6.   If so… Why?

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7.    Would you say there are a variety of camera angles in our documentary?

Yes   No

8.   Do you think the graphics work well together in our documentary?

Yes   No

9.   Does the titling link in with the theme of our documentary?

Yes   No

10.                      Did you find the interviews were relevant to the documentary?

11.Were any of the interviews not relevant? If so, which ones?

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12.                       What did you like about our documentary?

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13.                       What would you change about our documentary?

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14.                       Would you say our cutaways were relevant?

Yes    No

15.                       Was our voice over relevant and informative?

Yes    No

16.                       Do you think the setting was relevant in the interviews?

Yes   No

17.                       Do you think our print advert gave an insight to our documentary?

Yes   No

18.                      Do you think our radio advert was relevant and informative towards our documentary?

Yes    No

Radio Script

Is Beauty Worth Pain?

The new T.V series on BBC3 where three beauty obbsessed individuals have been followed through the process of sygery. Is this influenced by celebrities?

We also looked into the general publics views on themselves and looking to see if being natural is still an option.

Tuesday, 9pm, BBC3

Print Advert Examples

Codes and Conventions Of Print Advert

strong key image

Words are kept to a minimum

The title is always included

The slogan is also included on the print advert

The scheduling information always included

Channel logo is prominent and on the right hand side

The print advert is usually a4 landscape size so that it is versatile and can be used at various sizes in newspapers, magazines or on billboards

Print Based Advert

We then added the light background which linked in with the topic of our documentary, we used quite a light colour so it wasn't too much for the background.

We found these fonts on dafont.com. This is an example of where we got the text from. and same with the other text as well for 'Worth Pain?'

We took out the 'a' in 'Worth Pain?' because we wanted to use something that linked in with the subject of our documentary.

We then went back to Dafont.com and found a more simple text for the 9pm Tuesday, we wanted the text to be similar to the text for BBC Three. We also added the rhetorical question is a Gray font so it linked in with the puppet character on the right hand side.

 

We took a picture of the tools for the back ground and we also made an 'a' out of the tools which were used in the back ground image.

 

After doing our research, we wanted to use a puppet as an idea to give the impression that the media controls the public. We did this by taking a picture of a hand and again cutting this out so that it was quite messy, we added the string effect by drawing lines.

This is what we started our print advert with, this is two pictures that we took, of two different people. We wanted to make the image quite interesting and strange. We cut around the body making it quite edgy and messy, we then cut around the head and did the same with this.



Examples Of Radio Adverts

Codes and Conventions Of Radio Advert

Common codes and conventions of radio adverts include-

• Most commonly radio adverts are 30 seconds long, though some stations offer a 60 second slot
• They contain a voiceover
• often include a music bed
• Contain infomation about how the company can be reached or watched if a television programme
• If for a television programme they contain clips of the programme
• If for a television programme they pose questions that will be answered in the show

Voice Over Script For Documentary

Katie Price has had numerous surgical procedures, these include 5 boob jobs, liposuction and veneers. Surgery can be the answer to many peoples confidence problems most common procedures include Breast, eyes and nose. Influenced by many celebrities in the public eye. Through research we found out that Katie Price uses sun beds on a daily basis and has bald patches from gluing in her hair extensions.

Is it celebrities like this that have changed the way the public perceived themselves? Its not just celebrities that thrive to get this glamorous look.

Sunbeds are estimated to cause 100 deaths from melanoma every year in the UK. Sunbeds also cause premature skin ageing which means your skin becomes cause, leathery and wrinkled at a younger age. When the tan fades, the damage remains. Using sun beds for the first time before the age of 35 increases the risk of developing melanoma skin cancer by 75%.

People who are most at risk are younger people, people who have a lot of moles, people with fare skin, people who burn easily, people who have had skin cancer in the past, people with a family history of skin cancer.

People who use sun beds under age increase their risk of malignancy by 55% in the UK. Almost 9000 cases of meligmaloma are diagnosed each year, and more than 1000 people die from the disease each year.

Editing and Production of Radio Advert

These pictures show our group editing our radio advert, the programme we used to do this was Adobe Premier.

Editing Diary

Friday 9th December

• Capture tape
• Deleted unneeded things

Monday 12th December

• Decided on Town interview questions
• Liz on the sun beds footage
• Made the beggining by linking all the people together in the same shot and switching these around

Tuesday 13th December

• Put in helens interviews
• Added dip to black between shots

Wednesday 14th December

• Added jade doing her make-up
• Added Jade interview
• Sped up the make-up scene

Friday 16th December

• More town interviews making them link with what was coming next
• Dip to black inbetween shots
• Added heather

Monday 19th December

• Changed the size of some of the shots so they were all the same
• Added article on Katie Price
• Paths to different parts of Katie Prices article

Wednesday 21st December

• Converted and downloaded the videos of archieve footage
• Edited these to the right size
• Edited these in together

Thursday 22nd December

• Found appropriate music
• Converted music
• Edited music to fit
• Put in audio transitions

Friday 23rd December

• Added video transitions (dip to black and cross fade)
• Fill sound left, only coming out of one side
• Downloaded fonts
• Added titles
• Added effect on titles

Monday 2nd January

• Made minor ajustments to editing
• Checked everything to make sure it was right.

Edit Decison List

After making a logging decision list, we then finally decided what we wanted to include in our documentary, we had to cut them down so that we could have a choppy openning scene filled with different types of facts and figures. Underneath shows the lengths we had after filming each piece however we didnt keep it to this length, we sped things up and slowed things down.

• Ellis's body - 4.55 - 4.61
• Helens interview - 4.61 - 9.72
• Sam L body - 9.72 - 9.78
• Heathers interview - 9.78 - 17.52
• Cut away picture - 17.52 - 17.61
• Sam B body - 17.61 - 17.68
• Decs body - 17.68 - 17.72
• Jade interview - 17.72 - 26.83
• Jades make up scene - 26.83 - 27.87
• Liz Case underwear - 27.87 - 29.45
• Liz Case Sunbed - 29.45 - 56.22
• Sunbed Shop - 56.22- 61.03
• Town interviews (2nd time) - 85.33 - 103.59
• Beauty Shop outside - 103.59 - 104.02

Logging Sheet

• 1st interview - 0.00 - 1.31
• 2nd interview - 1.31 - 2.58
• 3rd interview - 2.58 - 3.55
• 4th interview - 3.55 - 4.55
• Ellis's body - 4.55 - 4.61
• Helens interview - 4.61 - 9.72
• Sam L body - 9.72 - 9.78
• Heathers interview - 9.78 - 17.52
• Cut away picture - 17.52 - 17.61
• Sam B body - 17.61 - 17.68
• Decs body - 17.68 - 17.72
• Jade interview - 17.72 - 26.83
• Jades make up scene - 26.83 - 27.87
• Liz Case underwear - 27.87 - 29.45
• Liz Case Sunbed - 29.45 - 56.22
• Sunbed Shop - 56.22- 61.03
• Emmas body - 61.03 - 64.87
• Town interviews (1st time) - 64.87 - 85.33
• Town interviews (2nd time) - 85.33 - 103.59
• Beauty Shop outside - 103.59 - 104.02

Filming Diary

Tuesday 8th Novermber:
- Started filming in town, in the golden sqaure to get some interviews.
- Did interviews in town with eight girls and one boy.
- One actors house where we filmed in underwearfrom side profile.


Thursday 10th November:
- We went to 3 actors houses to get some side profiles.
- Went to Thelwall beautitions to ask for permission to get cutaways of sunbeds and Nail stuff but they didnt reply.
- Took still pictures of beauty unlimted in Grapenhall.
- Took stills of hair salons in Thelwall.


Saturday 12th November:
-Went to two actors homes to get side profiles.
- Went to Ashleas house to film all different types of mae up being spilled out of a make up bag and made it into a title.


Wednesday 16th November:
- Went to Helen Davies house to film her interview but left the tape at home so couldnt do it due to timing.
- Went to 100 degrees to ask for permission to film around the salon and booked a date to do it.
- Went to four different beauty places and two hair salon in Lymm village to collect leaflets to make a montage out of them.


Thursday 17th November:
- Filmed a student from Priestley college discussing what surgical procejures she had done.
- Went to do some editing and realised everything we had recorded (all interviews) had no voice on it, so we had to go back and do it all over again.


Friday 18th November:
- Went to Jade Harrisons house to film her putting on make up.
- Filmed an interview of her discussing why she wears make up.
- Filmed the montage we had made out of the leaflets to get a cutaway.


Sunday 27th November:
- Filmed at 100 degrees again, from outside looking at the shop to get a few cut aways.
- Got some cutaways of the massage room in 100 degrees
- Actor Liz was recorded walking up the stairs going to the sunbeds.
- Liz recorded being id'd and paying to go on the sunbeds.
- Recorded getting onto the sunbed and taking off her make-up.


Tuesday 29th November:
- Filmed Helen Davies (Surgery patient) answering the questions about her procejure.


Wednesday 2nd December:
- Interviewed four girls at Warrington town at the Golden sqaure.


Monday 5th December:
- Interviewed Heather Shopland (surgery patient) answering questions about her procejure.


Wednesday 7th December:
- Went into class to capture the last bits of what we had recorded.
- Carried on editing
- Cut out the bits we didnt want to use or the bits that had gone wrong.
- Used a teacher from Priestley college to do our voice over.


Thursday 8th December:
- Made the Print Advert and completed it.
- Finished the Radio advert and gave it some last finishing touches.

Location Sheets

1. The first shot is based at all their own houses as they were in their bra and knickers so they could feel more comfortable.
2. The make up scene was at her own house located in her bedroom.
3. We did the question interviews in Warrington town centre, this was so we could get a wide range of answers.
4. Plastic Surgery patient Helen Davies talks about her experience located at her own house.
5. Question Interviews 2 - located at Warrington town centre again.
6. Scene of the make up located in her house.
7. Beauty Fanatic Jade Harrison located in her own room.
8. Through this next scene are actor is going on the sunbeds we located this at 'Hundred Degrees' which is a sunbed place.
9. Next shot was located downstairs of the Hundred Degrees in the massage room.
10. Plastic surgery patient Heather Shopland located at her own house doing the interview.
11. Filmed a student at Priestley college for an interview.
12. Filmed in a nail department to show the products people use through beauty.
13. Got still pictures from Grapenhall of a beauty shop.

Shots we didn't use but were located:
1. Ashlea's house doing the title scene trying to make the word 'Beauty' in different types of make up.
2. A scene at one of our actors houses, we didn't use this as we couldn't use them in our film because they were a student of Priestley college.
3. Went to Thelwall beauticians to ask for permission to film there to get cutaways but we weren't allowed.
14. We went to 4 different beauty shops and 2 salons to try and film.

Interview Questions

* When did you have plastic surgery?
* Why did you have plastic surgery?
* How much did it cost to have surgery and do you think it was worth it?
* Do you think it has changed you as a person?
* Would you recommend it to other people?
* After having this procedure would you have anything else done?
* Was it your choice to have plastic surgery or did somebody convince you?
* How long did it take you to recover?
* What was your main concern of the surgery?
* If your daughter had the same problem would you allow her to have surgery?
* What were the options if the procedure wasn’t taken into place?
* Is this procedure covered by insurance?
* How did you find your surgeon?
* Were there any limitations after surgery?
* Are you happy of the effects of the surgery?
* How long did the operation last?
* What was the success rate of your operation?
* Was there any extra that wasn’t included in the price?
* What type of implant was used?

Story Boards

Our Story Board shows what we will be recording in the openning of our documentary, it lasts 5 minutes however, we have the running order of how we will fill the whole hour of our documentary. 

Running Order

·         Clips of peoples bodies shown in a side profile changing with different peoples bodies-10 seconds

·         Pictures of body parts with titles shown over the top – 10 seconds

·         Questions asked to the general public about what they’d change about them – 30 seconds

·         Cutaway of news paper stories about surgery with narrator over the top talking about statistics- 30 seconds

·         Questions asked to general public – 20 seconds

·         Celebrity before and after pictures narrator– 40 seconds

·         Interview with someone who’s had surgery discussing positives – 1.50 seconds

·         Cutaway – 10/20 seconds

·         Archive footage of somebody having surgery – 30 seconds

·         Interview with someone discussing negatives about surgery, gone wrong- 3minutes

·         Narration about semi-permanent things with background of someone in a tanning salon – 30seconds

·         Questions  to the general public about sun beds/hair extensions etc – 40seconds

·         Show someone getting id’d for going on the sun beds – 10 seconds

·         Interview with someone who works at a tanning salon – 1 minute

·          Cutaway of archive footage of a news clip about someone who’s addicted to the sun beds- 30 seconds

·         Interviews showing peoples reactions to the statistics – 30 seconds (10.40)

·         Interview with surgeon asking about patients and their opinions discussing negatives/positives-2.30 minutes

·         Cutaway of someone being consulted about surgery shows the pictures of the difference it makes- 1 minute

·         3 minute advert break

·         Show archive footage of tattooed make-up with narrator over the top – 40seconds

·         Interview with someone who’s has make-up tattooed 1.30minutes

·         Questions asked to the public about tattooed makeup-40seconds

·         Interview with a tattooist who does the procedure- 2minutes

·         Ask the general public about the amount of makeup they wear, in the day and when they go out – eyelashes and extensions etc. – 40seconds

·         Cutaway of someone wearing heavy makeup taking it off fast forwarded -20seconds

·         Look into the media (newspapers magazines) about why people feel the pressure to wear so much makeup- 1minute

·         Narration about people having surgery to prevent ageing, before and after pictures- 20 seconds

·         Interview older people whether they’d have surgery to prevent ageing- 40 seconds

·         Interview someone who’s had facelift/Botox etc. – 1.30

·         Show someone getting botox with narrator giving statistics- 20 seconds

·         Narrator giving conclusion – 20 seconds